And guess what, I received my first Blog Award, and that too, "Valentine Award" wow...cool...he he...thanks Ayu, made my day!! I would love to give some credit for inspiration for writing this poem too!! Here it goes,
" Winds that kissed her face
The legs that got the warm embrace
How lucky were they, he thought
That was something that he sought
There she sat facing the sea
where the sun looked like a pea
Closed were the eyes and dreams alive
Filled with love and joyous and bright
There was a wish within
If only she could see him
She opened her eyes to see around
Standing in front of her, him she found
In disbelief, she closed her eyes
He touched her face and there he sighed
She still couldnt believe he was there
Now the love was filled in the air
The moment stood still and hearts thumped
Hearts that spoke but lips were mum
He adored the beauty that she hold
Mouths were shut but everything was told
Eyes that speak and see through soul
Thats the gift that Lovers hold
They gazed and sighed for a while
Just to see a lovely smile
She closed her eyes to thank her God
Just to realize He was gone "
[P.S.- Image - Rondeau Is For Lovers by ~xkenzerx - deviantart.com]
6 comments:
Its a beautiful post ya :)
You deserve that award. :)
Keep it up :)
Hey there...thanx for dropping by and commenting. I'm glad u like my words.
and yup, keep coming and commenting:)
Love and Peace,
Rahul
Cute hain Rahul...bilkul aap ke tarah;-)
@SC
Sweet hai bilkul aapki tarah..;):D
@ayu
Hey ayu, thnx buddy...I hope its actually good coz I made so quickly,( in around 15-20 mins, and actually I got idea of writing such poem, only after getting that award, coz i felt better not have a blank page for this day after having such an award,) and the words are so simple...and first of all...did something of this sort for the first time..actually felt a bit nervous and kinda funny too...h ehe...hope can do it in future too!!^__^
nice
gr8 rhyming... njoyed it
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